02-12-2013, 07:43 PM
Hi Brandon,
I liked many things about the poem lovely lines like, 'I Let the moon
Swallow me.', and that it was rich in sights and sounds. I thought some bits were a little choppy- stanza 2 eg.
Thanks for the read.
Cheers,
I liked many things about the poem lovely lines like, 'I Let the moon
Swallow me.', and that it was rich in sights and sounds. I thought some bits were a little choppy- stanza 2 eg.
Thanks for the read.
Cheers,