02-12-2013, 10:37 AM
i like it, an extra foot in L3 if the penultimate verse. silent, feeling ill ] would sort it out.
i like the idea of him having a journal. i know it's for fun but you used quill three times which is two times to many. like i say, i enjoyed the read.
i like the idea of him having a journal. i know it's for fun but you used quill three times which is two times to many. like i say, i enjoyed the read.