The Schism of Word and Number (Revision)

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The Schism of Word and Number (Revision)

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02-11-2013, 09:31 PM

AJ, thank you for the extensive critique and read. I very much appreciated it. Let's see: I corrected the period, will give some thought to 332, and ask you final question in PM. Thank you again. It's nice to know what conveyed and what didn't. Thank you again for all the work you put into this.

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Todd

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The Schism of Word and Number (Revision) - by Todd - 02-10-2013, 11:34 AM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Todd - 02-10-2013, 12:14 PM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by serge gurkski - 02-10-2013, 12:24 PM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Todd - 02-10-2013, 12:30 PM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by serge gurkski - 02-10-2013, 07:59 PM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by cidermaid - 02-10-2013, 08:57 PM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by cidermaid - 02-11-2013, 03:00 AM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Todd - 02-11-2013, 03:35 AM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by cidermaid - 02-11-2013, 04:45 PM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Todd - 02-11-2013, 09:31 PM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Anne - 04-30-2015, 02:28 AM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Todd - 04-30-2015, 07:15 AM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by milo - 04-30-2015, 07:01 AM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Todd - 04-30-2015, 07:17 AM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number (Revision) - by Todd - 05-05-2015, 05:33 AM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number (Revision) - by Anne - 05-05-2015, 07:54 AM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number (Revision) - by Todd - 05-05-2015, 10:48 AM

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