02-10-2013, 11:58 PM
Hi Knight,
You have a couple lines that are interesting that you could build around.
A future strewn around the wick
Young lust is born to tip toe
The introspection detracts from the immediacy.
Just some thoughts.
Welcome to the site!
You have a couple lines that are interesting that you could build around.
A future strewn around the wick
Young lust is born to tip toe
The introspection detracts from the immediacy.
Just some thoughts.
Welcome to the site!
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson