02-10-2013, 08:57 PM
Hi Todd,
I'll be getting back to this one as soon as I can. First impressions this is a well crafted and conceived poem.
Obviously I am locked into a text that is at once familiar and then again your poem leads me on some new thought paths.
Some intriguing ideas about creation, numerology perhaps and some deep theology....love it.
Your problem was three year old chaos, mine is, youngest daughter's 23rd b'day. Will try again tonight or first thing tomorrow.
Glancing through I think I am going to be hard pressed to make any critiques along the lines of the usual suspects. You are too dammed accomplished to leave too many obvious nits lying around...I think I will have my work cut out to find much to say.
Love the title - the parting of ways of the word and the number. Clever & nice.
Regards
AJ.
I'll be getting back to this one as soon as I can. First impressions this is a well crafted and conceived poem.
Obviously I am locked into a text that is at once familiar and then again your poem leads me on some new thought paths.
Some intriguing ideas about creation, numerology perhaps and some deep theology....love it.
Your problem was three year old chaos, mine is, youngest daughter's 23rd b'day. Will try again tonight or first thing tomorrow.
Glancing through I think I am going to be hard pressed to make any critiques along the lines of the usual suspects. You are too dammed accomplished to leave too many obvious nits lying around...I think I will have my work cut out to find much to say.
Love the title - the parting of ways of the word and the number. Clever & nice.
Regards
AJ.