The Door to Nothing
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Hi Heslopian

green? - well they said it above - also 'ascending'?

why is it suicide and yet you are ascending?

I like the title - and that first image of the open door - just push it a little and you will be through.

rests on our side; on the other side is darkness => on this line, can you find another way to say it so that you don't need to repeat side?

why is it 'our'?

cheers

StalKeR
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The Door to Nothing - by heslopian - 02-09-2013, 09:24 AM
RE: The Door to Nothing - by brandontoh - 02-09-2013, 04:15 PM
RE: The Door to Nothing - by heslopian - 02-09-2013, 10:56 PM
RE: The Door to Nothing - by Kreative - 02-10-2013, 01:31 PM
RE: The Door to Nothing - by Stalker - 02-10-2013, 06:37 PM
RE: The Door to Nothing - by heslopian - 02-10-2013, 10:11 PM
RE: The Door to Nothing - by lolo - 02-12-2013, 08:28 PM
RE: The Door to Nothing - by heslopian - 02-13-2013, 10:13 AM
RE: The Door to Nothing - by billy - 02-13-2013, 10:31 AM
RE: The Door to Nothing - by heslopian - 02-13-2013, 12:01 PM



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