The beach - prose. (Edit 2)

The beach - prose. (Edit 2)

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02-10-2013, 07:57 AM

Hi AJ,
have you ever considered to recite your text? (adds an additional layer containing lots of information and even and most importantly information for the writer too). Just a thought..

I am beginning to like the Pantoum version more. (the reason is: conciseness bc you must make your words fit into the form.)

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The beach - prose. (Edit 2) - by cidermaid - 02-01-2013, 04:46 PM

RE: The beach - prose. - by serge gurkski - 02-01-2013, 06:10 PM

RE: The beach - prose. - by cidermaid - 02-01-2013, 07:53 PM

RE: The beach - prose. - by serge gurkski - 02-01-2013, 08:28 PM

RE: The beach - prose. - by rowens - 02-02-2013, 06:20 AM

RE: The beach - prose. - by rowens - 02-03-2013, 01:03 PM

RE: The beach - prose. - by rowens - 02-04-2013, 04:29 AM

RE: The beach - prose. - by serge gurkski - 02-05-2013, 03:50 AM

RE: The beach - prose. - by cidermaid - 02-05-2013, 03:54 AM

RE: The beach - prose. - by serge gurkski - 02-05-2013, 04:03 AM

RE: The beach - prose. - by Keith - 02-07-2013, 05:46 AM

RE: The beach - prose. - by Todd - 02-08-2013, 07:07 AM

RE: The beach - prose. - by serge gurkski - 02-08-2013, 07:48 AM

RE: The beach - prose. - by cidermaid - 02-08-2013, 03:48 PM

RE: The beach - prose. (Edit) - by cidermaid - 02-10-2013, 02:05 AM

RE: The beach - prose. (Edit) - by serge gurkski - 02-10-2013, 02:10 AM

RE: The beach - prose. (Edit) - by Todd - 02-10-2013, 07:47 AM

RE: The beach - prose. (Edit) - by serge gurkski - 02-10-2013, 07:57 AM

RE: The beach - prose. (Edit 2) - by cidermaid - 02-12-2013, 06:08 PM

RE: The beach - prose. (Edit 2) - by Todd - 02-12-2013, 09:19 PM

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