02-10-2013, 02:10 AM
no time right now but will come back, I have not yet read Todd's indepth critique.
Well, ok: perused your edit a bit. It looks promising.
Well, ok: perused your edit a bit. It looks promising.
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The beach - prose. (Edit 2) - by cidermaid - 02-01-2013, 04:46 PM
RE: The beach - prose. - by serge gurkski - 02-01-2013, 06:10 PM
RE: The beach - prose. - by cidermaid - 02-01-2013, 07:53 PM
RE: The beach - prose. - by serge gurkski - 02-01-2013, 08:28 PM
RE: The beach - prose. - by rowens - 02-02-2013, 06:20 AM
RE: The beach - prose. - by rowens - 02-03-2013, 01:03 PM
RE: The beach - prose. - by rowens - 02-04-2013, 04:29 AM
RE: The beach - prose. - by serge gurkski - 02-05-2013, 03:50 AM
RE: The beach - prose. - by cidermaid - 02-05-2013, 03:54 AM
RE: The beach - prose. - by serge gurkski - 02-05-2013, 04:03 AM
RE: The beach - prose. - by Keith - 02-07-2013, 05:46 AM
RE: The beach - prose. - by Todd - 02-08-2013, 07:07 AM
RE: The beach - prose. - by serge gurkski - 02-08-2013, 07:48 AM
RE: The beach - prose. - by cidermaid - 02-08-2013, 03:48 PM
RE: The beach - prose. (Edit) - by cidermaid - 02-10-2013, 02:05 AM
RE: The beach - prose. (Edit) - by serge gurkski - 02-10-2013, 02:10 AM
RE: The beach - prose. (Edit) - by Todd - 02-10-2013, 07:47 AM
RE: The beach - prose. (Edit) - by serge gurkski - 02-10-2013, 07:57 AM
RE: The beach - prose. (Edit 2) - by cidermaid - 02-12-2013, 06:08 PM
RE: The beach - prose. (Edit 2) - by Todd - 02-12-2013, 09:19 PM
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