02-09-2013, 10:56 PM
Thank you for your honest feedback, brandontoh, and so long as you're not personally insulting me feel free to be harsh
Your feedback was very thorough and useful. This is a fairly old poem, from around the middle of last year, so I don't quite remember the process that went into it, but I think it was meant to be abstract. It's about suicide. "Green" represents grass/lushness etc.
Your feedback was very thorough and useful. This is a fairly old poem, from around the middle of last year, so I don't quite remember the process that went into it, but I think it was meant to be abstract. It's about suicide. "Green" represents grass/lushness etc.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe