02-09-2013, 10:43 PM
this is not about originality but instead about something that happened.
I'm pretty sorry that my life displeases you thus muchly.
but - on a slightly lighter note - would not you, queen of the marketing strategists
in the first place know that bad publicity arouses the most interest?
Well, at least I was for once comprehensible.
Thank you for reading me. I do appreciate that . :-)
cheers
Serge
see: threesome!
update re blog: the woman who first liked my porn,has just retracted. Instead now I have a male liker. Not sure if I am so fond of that. ;-)
I hope you know, that this is tongue in cheek.
If you compare this text to Blue Lament, could you point out to me why this one is worse?
This question is NOT tongue in cheek.
Is it rather the content or the style?
I apologize to Lucy.
My pms comment was total bs.
Please accept my apologies.
wrapped it up a bit
rev one on
I'm pretty sorry that my life displeases you thus muchly.
but - on a slightly lighter note - would not you, queen of the marketing strategists
in the first place know that bad publicity arouses the most interest?
(02-09-2013, 10:18 PM)cidermaid Wrote: Hi SergeHi Cidermaid,
Sorry but this just does not do anything for me on a poetic level. It reads more like a shopping list of picture stories i might want to see in my next sexual fantasy magazine. I don't have a problem with poetry that is sexual or even pornographic in nature. (I particularly like flying pork!). Sadly (by comparison, after reading some of your other poems), this one has no imagery, subtlety or finesse and if there is poetic art used I will need others to point it out for me. Sorry to be so harsh, but then this is the serious critique board.
I have come to really appreciate your submissions and make a point of reading your work because it is more often than not very enjoyable and I highly rate a lot of your work....In my opinion this submission is not worthy of your name or this thread. JMO of course and I will continue to look out for some of your other poems.
AJ.
Well, at least I was for once comprehensible.
Thank you for reading me. I do appreciate that . :-)
cheers
Serge
see: threesome!
update re blog: the woman who first liked my porn,has just retracted. Instead now I have a male liker. Not sure if I am so fond of that. ;-)
I hope you know, that this is tongue in cheek.
If you compare this text to Blue Lament, could you point out to me why this one is worse?
This question is NOT tongue in cheek.
Is it rather the content or the style?
I apologize to Lucy.
My pms comment was total bs.
Please accept my apologies.
wrapped it up a bit
rev one on