Hope

[serge gurkski]

welcome from me to. I do not understand your poem.

I like:

" keeping us afloat,
It is the morning, and it is the night,"
I find it poetical and it flows fine and it is new. Here i can hear a distinct voice, your voice.

"It is our fear of death,"
I agree, but the phrasing is not as good as in my quote above.

your last line is not bad at all.
So I have mixed feelings, but you said that you are new to poetry.
I want to encourage you to write on.

serge