Message from Clover Hill

[tectak]

Well tec, I've looked at this piece many times and way before I came to post I tried convincing myself it was poetic enough, I sort of knew all along tho that you'd disagree!! You wouldn't expect me to be quite as vehement as you are but... sadly I do agree. Having said that - I'll hang on for a few more comments from others and eventually turn it into the finest American Civil War poem you have ever read... by a Nigerian named Pete who also plays sax and harmonica.

Sod the sax and harmonica....sooner or later you'll run out of breath Stick to poetry, you are good at it.......when you write it, that is
Best,
tectak