Do you fear me?

[DaedricPrince]

Hi DaedricPrince,

I don't really see anything here that can be used to make an effective poem. Its trying too hard to be poetic which makes it sound forced and odd. I don't often say this, but starting from scratch may be the best idea. This is just a miss.

Best,

Todd

Hello!

So....you suggest me to start over, aye? That isn't exactly...possible. Nor shall I ever do so.

I myself, do understand my poems aren't that good. However, why don't people like you (really good, apparently) actually start giving feedback and stop saying one little thing? That does not involve 'starting over'.

This is why I chose to post in the 'High Critique forum' instead..didn't work out.