02-06-2013, 07:56 PM
Thank you Bilbo, brandon and serge for your kind feedback
brandon, I was thinking of dividing this into stanzas, and Bilbo, thanks for pointing out the transition (or lack thereof). I looked back and it does kind of smack you in the face
serge, forgive me if I sound like a giant prole, but doesn't "opera" relate only to music?
brandon, I was thinking of dividing this into stanzas, and Bilbo, thanks for pointing out the transition (or lack thereof). I looked back and it does kind of smack you in the face serge, forgive me if I sound like a giant prole, but doesn't "opera" relate only to music?
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