The Fergusonian Impact

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I can't tell if I like this and how awkward the lines end and start (with capital letters even though the sentence wasn't done--I do that sometimes too). I'm sorry if you weren't going for awkward, but the pauses and breaks make me feel like I need to catch my breath, and yes, this does sound very much like a song. I really like the content too, but the first line's exclamation point seems a little cheesy when I read it, but maybe I just don't like punctuation.