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As Our Opuses Rot
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02-06-2013, 08:09 AM
Jack, I'll come back and do a proper critique but on first reading, you have some awesome ideas, mapping the end of "civilisation" through the devolution of writing. However, I can't help feeling that using shit, piss and fuck all in a poem like this is a bit gratuitous. They're not shocking words, they're out of place words. And you know that's not because I don't like a good shit, piss and fuck
It could be worse
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As Our Opuses Rot - by heslopian - 02-06-2013, 08:03 AM
RE: As Our Opuses Rot - by Leanne - 02-06-2013, 08:09 AM
RE: As Our Opuses Rot - by heslopian - 02-06-2013, 08:18 AM
RE: As Our Opuses Rot - by billy - 02-06-2013, 10:56 AM
RE: As Our Opuses Rot - by brandontoh - 02-06-2013, 04:10 PM
RE: As Our Opuses Rot - by serge gurkski - 02-06-2013, 05:37 PM
RE: As Our Opuses Rot - by heslopian - 02-06-2013, 07:56 PM
RE: As Our Opuses Rot - by serge gurkski - 02-06-2013, 08:08 PM
RE: As Our Opuses Rot - by Stalker - 02-07-2013, 03:17 AM
RE: As Our Opuses Rot - by heslopian - 02-07-2013, 06:13 AM
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