Where I Lay my Head ( Early Valentine Card)

[tectak]

Not that easy. I will simply boldify the lines I find fine.

In this room, I lay with loves I met.
I filed away the images I knew
would rise again, like wraiths of raw regret;
and that one day I’d say goodbye to you.

You lie beside me as the light disclaims
the greyed out phantoms, fantasies still clear.
I see her move across my recalled frames
and taste once more the sweetness of her tears.

Then there was the long and snow-deep night;
another sat upon this bed and cried.
I watched her rise, naked in the light,
dress slowly, leaving with her pride.

I look to where a silhouette still lies;
her name was kept, she never made it known.
We thrashed and threw our passion to dark skies
but when I woke and called her…she was gone.

I damn you for your bodies, ageless, pure!
Why do the recollections stay so new?
How could I love so long, yet be unsure?
Goodbye past loves, another day with you.

Tectak
Jan 2013

not bad at all.

Thank you, serge. I am renewed by you pithyness There must be a sting in the tale?

Mods please note: It's getting very cliquey in here!

I liked the lines I put in bold. Don't panic. ;-) No stings, lol. Relax, please. All will be good. .-)
i am watching The Life of Brian. That might explain my pithiness. ;-)

cheers
Serge

Ooops! Did I say pithyness? I meant, of course, pissiness
Best,
Gotcha,
tectak