02-05-2013, 11:30 AM
(02-05-2013, 07:48 AM)IAmJeromeo Wrote: Unrequited pain is almost worse than unrequited love, and while I suffer every day, I see that you're okay and as much as I hate myself for it, I wish it would happen a different way. I wish that you felt the pain I feel or at least anything at all.Oh. my. god. You, good sir, have written my thoughts. Or perhaps I have thought your words? Either way, the entire poem is extremely relatable, which I think is very hard to do. And I agree with you, Tennyson WAS a madman.
I wish I could offer more creative criticism or advice, but my mind is screaming "HE GETS IT!" so loudly, that I can't really find anything negative to say.