02-05-2013, 09:54 AM
As I said, this is not the last revision. I take my time with this one. You are of course correct about the typos. I am not too happy with the whole poem. I think it is 2 poems at least.
I am amazed at your stamina to read me so extensively and intensely. Maybe now you know this poem better than I do. No lingua in maxillam.
Because I am not a native speaker my English must sound a bit odd, which I of course don't mind. It is (almost) good enough for me. ,-)
I write in German too and you would be surprised how much criticism I get from German native speakers but mostly they shy back. I am a quite soft person and would never take a mean critique seriously in the first place. I am almost 50 and learned to cope with all kinds of strange people like myself. Once someone put a gun in my face (you know what I mean) and as if his life would depend on it tried to kill me. He was stoned but still couldn't. You will understand that I am not too easily impressed by some well-formarmaladed criticism, even if by you. ,-)
I prefer arrogant women actually. Call me kinky. I prefer them over the whiny ones. the latter I find behaving unfairly.
Arrogant males on the other hand always make me grin, simply because I don't want to fuck them, so why in all heavens should I care?
I am pretty sure you got the gist by now.
I always rejoice when you address me, even if you have no boobs to impress me with. Do you recall the Apollinaire piece: The breasts of Tiresias?
http://wikilivres.ca/wiki/Les_Mamelles_de_Tirésias
Give it a try. It won't hurt. ;-)
cheers
Serge
I am amazed at your stamina to read me so extensively and intensely. Maybe now you know this poem better than I do. No lingua in maxillam.
Because I am not a native speaker my English must sound a bit odd, which I of course don't mind. It is (almost) good enough for me. ,-)
I write in German too and you would be surprised how much criticism I get from German native speakers but mostly they shy back. I am a quite soft person and would never take a mean critique seriously in the first place. I am almost 50 and learned to cope with all kinds of strange people like myself. Once someone put a gun in my face (you know what I mean) and as if his life would depend on it tried to kill me. He was stoned but still couldn't. You will understand that I am not too easily impressed by some well-formarmaladed criticism, even if by you. ,-)
I prefer arrogant women actually. Call me kinky. I prefer them over the whiny ones. the latter I find behaving unfairly.
Arrogant males on the other hand always make me grin, simply because I don't want to fuck them, so why in all heavens should I care?
I am pretty sure you got the gist by now.
I always rejoice when you address me, even if you have no boobs to impress me with. Do you recall the Apollinaire piece: The breasts of Tiresias?
http://wikilivres.ca/wiki/Les_Mamelles_de_Tirésias
Give it a try. It won't hurt. ;-)
cheers
Serge