Dream Fillfullment

[tectak]

I like this poem, does the rhyme scheme have a formal name?not that I know. I call it Roger It's interesting and your consistency is admirable. Also the content is amusing.
My only area of concern is the first half of S2 which doesn't provide me with a strong enough image:
"Please lift, you lids!eyelids
Cast off the lead
that weighs you down,
and pulls you shut."Surely, you've been here! It can't just be me
I don't know what's going on here but it doesn't stop me enjoying the poem.
I also feel the whole thing may be a stanza too long,the Q. I asked myself was, is the joke contained in the piece, justified by the amount of reading I have to do to get it?apparently not
Apologies - I'm struggling for critique time, so this review is v.rushed

Thanks for everything you commented on.....I am now dozing.
Best,
tectak