Another round

[Jae Mc Donnell]

"Asking, mind your head as you step into life."
I love all of the really striking imageries in the poem, but this line really stood out to me. I feel like it divided the poem between the mood of coming into the world, and then accepting that you'll die anyway. Don't know if that was the original intent, but it's a poem that definitely makes you think.

Yeah AisforApple, that was pretty much what I was going for with that line and a bit of a reference to the birth process.
Also I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, and thankyou for reading and commenting