Who else.

[newsclippings]

Now I know what I want to say. The first three quarters of this poem remind me of an Eminem rap song (or that's how i read it in my head), but then it falters out into something else.

And this line read a little awkward for me, though it was probably purposeful (that you started and ended with 'you', in which case it'd be cool if you started and ended with 'me' in that later line: "you? Damn right but don't let the compliment get to you"

Hokai then.