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Of Silent Gazes, Of Algid Love
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02-04-2013, 01:45 PM
I get the image of the musings between couch cushions like loose change. The edit does clean the opening up. I had a favorable reaction to this when you first wrote it. I already pointed out the minor bumps I had in the other thread. I'll give it some more thought, but I do like this.
Best, Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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Of Silent Gazes, Of Algid Love - by brandontoh - 02-04-2013, 12:26 PM
RE: Of Silent Gazes, Of Algid Love - by billy - 02-04-2013, 12:36 PM
RE: Of Silent Gazes, Of Algid Love - by brandontoh - 02-04-2013, 12:48 PM
RE: Of Silent Gazes, Of Algid Love - by billy - 02-04-2013, 01:13 PM
RE: Of Silent Gazes, Of Algid Love - by Todd - 02-04-2013, 01:45 PM
RE: Of Silent Gazes, Of Algid Love - by newsclippings - 02-04-2013, 03:04 PM
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