02-04-2013, 12:48 PM
'Musings sunk deep, in stale couch and old fire.'
Do you think this edit works better? =x I'm aware that the first stanza is weaker. Thanks Billy, for pointing out which line exactly is off. =)
Do you think this edit works better? =x I'm aware that the first stanza is weaker. Thanks Billy, for pointing out which line exactly is off. =)
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