Another round
#4
Thankyou both for the nice words.
Leanne I know what you mean about the P line, but I kinda like it Big Grin

Brandontoh, I actually wrote the poem because I really liked the sound of the word preamble, I then wrote that line. then a few days later I wrote the rest of the poem, but I do understand why you would not like it.

Thanks again both of you Smile
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Another round - by Jae Mc Donnell - 02-02-2013, 11:50 PM
RE: Another round - by Leanne - 02-03-2013, 04:13 AM
RE: Another round - by brandontoh - 02-03-2013, 11:19 PM
RE: Another round - by Jae Mc Donnell - 02-04-2013, 04:43 AM
RE: Another round - by AisforApple - 02-04-2013, 06:10 AM
RE: Another round - by Jae Mc Donnell - 02-04-2013, 05:21 PM



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