02-04-2013, 04:43 AM
Thankyou both for the nice words.
Leanne I know what you mean about the P line, but I kinda like it
Brandontoh, I actually wrote the poem because I really liked the sound of the word preamble, I then wrote that line. then a few days later I wrote the rest of the poem, but I do understand why you would not like it.
Thanks again both of you
Leanne I know what you mean about the P line, but I kinda like it

Brandontoh, I actually wrote the poem because I really liked the sound of the word preamble, I then wrote that line. then a few days later I wrote the rest of the poem, but I do understand why you would not like it.
Thanks again both of you

