02-03-2013, 07:59 PM 
	
	
	
		This poem reminds me of "Every Breath You Take" by The Police in the way it looks like a sweet love song, but is really creepy and about obsession. I like the use of terms like "bass" and "keys" to evoke an imagined spiritual connection through music. Thank you for the read 
	
	
	
 
	
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
	

 

 
