Four Hour Warning
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Hi times,

the title lured me in. Very catchy!
I find the Holocaust metaphor a bit too much.
Like the internal rhyme (wine - dine)

Love most the last stanza.
I reach for familiar hands.

thanks for the read.

serge
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Four Hour Warning - by Keith - 02-01-2013, 09:39 AM
RE: Four Hour Warning - by serge gurkski - 02-03-2013, 07:13 PM
RE: Four Hour Warning - by Keith - 02-04-2013, 08:54 AM
RE: Four Hour Warning - by tectak - 02-03-2013, 10:00 PM
RE: Four Hour Warning - by serge gurkski - 02-03-2013, 11:01 PM
RE: Four Hour Warning - by Keith - 02-11-2013, 10:23 AM



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