02-03-2013, 07:13 PM
Hi times,
the title lured me in. Very catchy!
I find the Holocaust metaphor a bit too much.
Like the internal rhyme (wine - dine)
Love most the last stanza.
I reach for familiar hands.
thanks for the read.
serge
the title lured me in. Very catchy!
I find the Holocaust metaphor a bit too much.
Like the internal rhyme (wine - dine)
Love most the last stanza.
I reach for familiar hands.
thanks for the read.
serge
