Politically Speaking
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while i found no struggle to identify with your intentions, i found it a struggle to read fluidly. lines such as:

It's evident because they still believe in the process and continue to vote

caused pause, as i couldn't continue without mentally trying to rephrase this line in a less verbose manner.

my apologies for not being able to offer anything more constructive.
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Politically Speaking - by Hidrolic - 01-29-2013, 11:58 PM
RE: Politically Speaking - by rowens - 01-30-2013, 02:10 AM
RE: Politically Speaking - by Mr. Shankly - 01-30-2013, 01:46 PM
RE: Politically Speaking - by Yelleryella123 - 01-30-2013, 03:17 PM
RE: Politically Speaking - by billy - 01-30-2013, 03:35 PM
RE: Politically Speaking - by dooces - 02-03-2013, 10:37 AM



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