02-03-2013, 10:37 AM
while i found no struggle to identify with your intentions, i found it a struggle to read fluidly. lines such as:
It's evident because they still believe in the process and continue to vote
caused pause, as i couldn't continue without mentally trying to rephrase this line in a less verbose manner.
my apologies for not being able to offer anything more constructive.
It's evident because they still believe in the process and continue to vote
caused pause, as i couldn't continue without mentally trying to rephrase this line in a less verbose manner.
my apologies for not being able to offer anything more constructive.
