i affirm this is a limerick
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(02-03-2013, 08:58 AM)Leanne Wrote:  I would have liked to see this rendered in slightly more limerick-y meter, but that's a small thing.
thank you for your thoughts.

while searching for perfection, iterations dissected both my words and my compass. i tried to sacrifice the meter delicately, as any map i found led my intentions astray. though limericks, im sure, are menial and simplistic for most, strict conformity threatens my resolve. any suggestions towards a less dissonant meter would be openly received, as i would like to deviate from the rule only on the omission.
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i affirm this is a limerick - by dooces - 02-03-2013, 08:55 AM
RE: i affirm this is a limerick - by Leanne - 02-03-2013, 08:58 AM
RE: i affirm this is a limerick - by dooces - 02-03-2013, 10:23 AM
RE: i affirm this is a limerick - by billy - 02-03-2013, 10:12 AM
RE: i affirm this is a limerick - by Leanne - 02-03-2013, 11:55 AM
RE: i affirm this is a limerick - by brandontoh - 02-03-2013, 01:49 PM
RE: i affirm this is a limerick - by heslopian - 02-03-2013, 01:50 PM



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