02-03-2013, 10:23 AM
(02-03-2013, 08:58 AM)Leanne Wrote: I would have liked to see this rendered in slightly more limerick-y meter, but that's a small thing.thank you for your thoughts.
while searching for perfection, iterations dissected both my words and my compass. i tried to sacrifice the meter delicately, as any map i found led my intentions astray. though limericks, im sure, are menial and simplistic for most, strict conformity threatens my resolve. any suggestions towards a less dissonant meter would be openly received, as i would like to deviate from the rule only on the omission.
