Turds of GODown

[serge gurkski]

ya Lucy. I was stone drunk, so ty for repeating here what you said on the phone.
As to the vernacular: I am prone to use that bc it sounds natural to me.
and then there's a very fine line to make it poetry.

Now then the colloquial cums with fillers. (the very words you sensed are unnecessary).
I first write, then share, then edit. I have a plan. ;-)
(despite the booze).

And you are right about the yets and the ands etc.

So that is a bit tricky for me: when keep it, when lose it.
I ll return to this one.

hugs

serge