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From The Cliffs.

From The Cliffs.
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#12
02-02-2013, 05:50 PM
It sounds old-fashioned but I like the blood spill.
You will be able to live with it, but the title is clumsy.

cheers
serge

No, i was wrong about the title.
It is good.
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From The Cliffs. - by billy - 01-31-2013, 07:40 AM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by Todd - 01-31-2013, 07:54 AM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by billy - 01-31-2013, 08:59 AM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by tectak - 02-01-2013, 02:49 AM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by billy - 02-01-2013, 05:40 AM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by shemthepenman - 02-01-2013, 06:41 AM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by billy - 02-01-2013, 07:19 AM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by Keith - 02-01-2013, 08:28 AM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by shemthepenman - 02-01-2013, 09:28 AM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by Mr. Shankly - 02-01-2013, 06:12 PM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by billy - 02-02-2013, 10:22 AM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by serge gurkski - 02-02-2013, 05:50 PM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by billy - 02-03-2013, 09:23 AM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by Todd - 02-03-2013, 09:41 AM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by tectak - 02-03-2013, 07:53 PM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by serge gurkski - 02-03-2013, 08:13 PM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by heslopian - 02-06-2013, 08:02 PM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by Keith - 02-07-2013, 06:04 AM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by billy - 02-07-2013, 05:32 PM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by tectak - 02-07-2013, 09:04 PM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by Stalker - 02-07-2013, 09:10 PM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by tectak - 02-08-2013, 12:13 AM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by serge gurkski - 02-08-2013, 01:22 AM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by serge gurkski - 02-07-2013, 09:19 PM
RE: From The Cliffs. - by billy - 02-08-2013, 07:02 AM



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