02-02-2013, 02:25 AM
No, I like vulgar. (and I love American poetry).
The tense: Yes. It sounds a bit to me like you put the emotions you evoked in stanza one to rest in stanza two by transferring them to a mythical past in stanza two (a time out of time) and I wonder how.
Is the universe now not dark anymore? How come? (That is not a critique).
cheers
serge
The tense: Yes. It sounds a bit to me like you put the emotions you evoked in stanza one to rest in stanza two by transferring them to a mythical past in stanza two (a time out of time) and I wonder how.
Is the universe now not dark anymore? How come? (That is not a critique).
cheers
serge