02-01-2013, 06:17 PM
Fits my bill.
The conceit arose that one understood.*
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Ok. I liked the repetitions a lot. They give rhythm to it, structure it.
Maybe it is a bit too pc, I dunno.
There are black arseholes too. etc.
Enjoyed the read
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*stole that from Mailer (Oswald's Tale)
cheers
Serge
The conceit arose that one understood.*
________
Ok. I liked the repetitions a lot. They give rhythm to it, structure it.
Maybe it is a bit too pc, I dunno.
There are black arseholes too. etc.
Enjoyed the read
---
*stole that from Mailer (Oswald's Tale)
cheers
Serge
