The Night the Blacks Came
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Fits my bill.
The conceit arose that one understood.*

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Ok. I liked the repetitions a lot. They give rhythm to it, structure it.
Maybe it is a bit too pc, I dunno.
There are black arseholes too. etc.
Enjoyed the read
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*stole that from Mailer (Oswald's Tale)

cheers
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The Night the Blacks Came - by rowens - 01-31-2013, 01:59 AM
RE: The Night the Blacks Came - by tectak - 01-31-2013, 02:48 AM
RE: The Night the Blacks Came - by rowens - 01-31-2013, 03:03 AM
RE: The Night the Blacks Came - by Wjames - 01-31-2013, 06:56 AM
RE: The Night the Blacks Came - by rowens - 01-31-2013, 07:18 AM
RE: The Night the Blacks Came - by billy - 01-31-2013, 07:47 AM
RE: The Night the Blacks Came - by rowens - 01-31-2013, 10:25 AM
RE: The Night the Blacks Came - by Mr. Shankly - 02-01-2013, 06:01 PM
RE: The Night the Blacks Came - by serge gurkski - 02-01-2013, 06:17 PM
RE: The Night the Blacks Came - by rowens - 02-01-2013, 10:42 PM
RE: The Night the Blacks Came - by serge gurkski - 02-01-2013, 11:14 PM
RE: The Night the Blacks Came - by rowens - 02-01-2013, 11:22 PM
RE: The Night the Blacks Came - by serge gurkski - 02-01-2013, 11:32 PM



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