From The Cliffs.

From The Cliffs.

billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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02-01-2013, 05:40 AM

i think the term for the rope is halyard but it didn't fit because it has three feet.

i like some of the suggestions for the 1st stanza so will look at them closely when i do an edit later.

thanks for the solid feedback tom

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From The Cliffs. - by billy - 01-31-2013, 07:40 AM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by Todd - 01-31-2013, 07:54 AM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by billy - 01-31-2013, 08:59 AM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by tectak - 02-01-2013, 02:49 AM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by billy - 02-01-2013, 05:40 AM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by shemthepenman - 02-01-2013, 06:41 AM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by billy - 02-01-2013, 07:19 AM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by Keith - 02-01-2013, 08:28 AM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by shemthepenman - 02-01-2013, 09:28 AM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by Mr. Shankly - 02-01-2013, 06:12 PM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by billy - 02-02-2013, 10:22 AM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by serge gurkski - 02-02-2013, 05:50 PM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by billy - 02-03-2013, 09:23 AM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by Todd - 02-03-2013, 09:41 AM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by tectak - 02-03-2013, 07:53 PM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by serge gurkski - 02-03-2013, 08:13 PM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by heslopian - 02-06-2013, 08:02 PM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by Keith - 02-07-2013, 06:04 AM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by billy - 02-07-2013, 05:32 PM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by tectak - 02-07-2013, 09:04 PM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by Stalker - 02-07-2013, 09:10 PM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by tectak - 02-08-2013, 12:13 AM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by serge gurkski - 02-08-2013, 01:22 AM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by serge gurkski - 02-07-2013, 09:19 PM

RE: From The Cliffs. - by billy - 02-08-2013, 07:02 AM

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