01-30-2013, 09:52 AM 
	
	
	
		Thanks Todd! =D I'll be editing it soon. Yours I find is rather abstract, and kind of morose. The abstract part may be due to my huge headache though. I like the rhyme scheme, and especially the first stanza. Will be back with my poem and move once I've done my morning workout! =D
	
	
	
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