Crayons
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(01-29-2013, 01:40 PM)lavashine Wrote:  I enjoyed reading your poem very much! I used to absolutely love make firework pictures with black over crayons - takes me back for sure. And a very clever last line, especially with the capitalization of the word Crayons, nice piece!
Very sorry lavashine, I some how missed your post, yes them firework pictures stuck with me too, I doubt that schools do them now, too much trouble. In fact I think I'll do one tonight Smile TOMH

(01-29-2013, 03:39 PM)brandontoh Wrote:  Oh wow nice poem. =D I really like it. Captures the thoughts of a child using crayons so well!
brandontoh
thank you for your kind words, much appreciated. TOMH

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Messages In This Thread
Crayons - by Keith - 12-04-2012, 06:52 PM
RE: Crayons - by benthejack - 12-04-2012, 07:42 PM
RE: Crayons - by Keith - 12-05-2012, 07:28 AM
RE: Crayons - by arbil_poieo - 12-05-2012, 01:19 AM
RE: Crayons - by billy - 12-05-2012, 10:26 AM
RE: Crayons - by davidbenjamindix - 12-19-2012, 12:44 AM
RE: Crayons - by benthejack - 12-19-2012, 05:38 AM
RE: Crayons - by Keith - 12-19-2012, 05:42 AM
RE: Crayons - by lavashine - 01-29-2013, 01:40 PM
RE: Crayons - by Keith - 01-30-2013, 04:54 AM
RE: Crayons - by brandontoh - 01-29-2013, 03:39 PM



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