01-30-2013, 02:35 AM
Thank you Bilbo, brandontoh and Mr. Shankly for your great feedback
I'm going to make another cut of the poem in the opening post with verse four removed, as I do think it doesn't quite fit with the rest. Again, thank you all for taking the time to give me critique, and I've read and will consider all of your suggestions.
I'm going to make another cut of the poem in the opening post with verse four removed, as I do think it doesn't quite fit with the rest. Again, thank you all for taking the time to give me critique, and I've read and will consider all of your suggestions.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe