The Age of Gods

[tectak]

From the age of Gods What age was this? There are as many god-botherers (and imagined gods) today as there have ever been. Just look at some other poetry sites
Kings, prophets and demonic lords Ditto Kings. You have not made a case. You have just given an ill-informed opinion
Men looked to the skies and prayed to the stars What stars....I can only think if one The sun. Name another
They pointed specifically to the home of their creator You are now compounding your truths by expanding a mistruth. Are you referring to a single religion here?
It was a physical place unlike the lines of the equator Lines of the equator? Again, shows a lack of understanding and is an unnecessarily reverse metaphor. There are many things unlike the "lines of the equator"....chocolate chip ice cream to name but one.[
Monuments were built on earth to commemorate their return in times laterThis is not good in terms of intent or construct. Whose return are you talking about? It is a hopelessly unclear and irritating line. The blank statement makes any concept (to credit it a little too highly) preachy and pedantic. I know what church/cathedral/mosque etc is for. Who are you writing this piece for? You are telling me nothing new.
In times of antiquity space wasn't just a place with lights
It ushered in the start of the human race and the birth of lifeYou are millions of years out here. I cannot continue because you are in danger of writing nonsense and I don't want to be around
They knew nothing of the worth of Christ
Those fables didn't exist nor did the prophets who they searched to write
The tales of the bible
They created the phrases to give praise to the idol
Trying to define cradle to the grave and a spiritual revival

Hello! hidrolic.
I am at a bit of a loss with this one. My overall, and initial, response is one of distrust. You have not convinced me that you are authorative enough to write in the area you have chosen. This colours any technical criticism because there is an overwhelming urge to correct the content.
This is not an easy thing to say but I think you should either research your work a good deal more or write on a different subject. The comments made here are not intended to be dismissive of your effort but indicative of the major problem which is apparent. On top of this I would urge you to punctuate. Without punctuation the inference is that you cannot punctuate.
[/b]Best,
tectak