A Place of Belief
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The dialogue in S4 is what I came up with first, and I just wrote a poem around it. Looking back, it doesn't quite fit with the tone of what surrounds it. I keep trying to go hardcore with phrases like "spastic blade" and threatening dialogue, but it rarely worksBig Grin Thank you for your kind and excellent feedback, LeanneSmile
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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A Place of Belief - by heslopian - 01-29-2013, 10:02 AM
RE: A Place of Belief - by Leanne - 01-29-2013, 11:21 AM
RE: A Place of Belief - by heslopian - 01-29-2013, 02:48 PM
RE: A Place of Belief - by billy - 01-29-2013, 05:02 PM
RE: A Place of Belief - by brandontoh - 01-29-2013, 05:29 PM
RE: A Place of Belief - by Mr. Shankly - 01-29-2013, 06:02 PM
RE: A Place of Belief - by heslopian - 01-30-2013, 02:35 AM
RE: A Place of Belief - by Bizzy - 02-01-2013, 07:30 AM
RE: A Place of Belief - by heslopian - 02-01-2013, 10:27 AM
RE: A Place of Belief - by Kelseymclemore - 02-02-2013, 05:35 AM
RE: A Place of Belief - by heslopian - 02-02-2013, 04:56 PM
RE: A Place of Belief - by dooces - 02-03-2013, 09:43 AM
RE: A Place of Belief - by billy - 02-03-2013, 10:09 AM
RE: A Place of Belief - by heslopian - 02-03-2013, 01:39 PM



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