Poem- any comments welcome!

[rowens]

Well, there's more good than bad. Now that I look at it again. I think it could use some smoothing out at certain places. But I could easily change my mind about that. The circumstance of the poem just comes off nicely. It has a gnarly feel to it, it the best sense of that word. So though I keep repeating that it could use some work: I like it as it is.