01-29-2013, 03:27 AM
I really love this. When I read it, I feel a rush of anger towards all those who judge, those who look but do not see. I like how your poem captured the ferocity of those being judged, and I feel like you've really known the struggle to get away from prying eyes yourself. Your writing has managed to depict the essence of the range of emotions one feels upon the realisation that they are being judged for their every move. You had me hooked from the first line. Brilliant work, I look forward to reading more of your work.