01-29-2013, 03:14 AM
it would be nice to see an edit and improvement on your writing. Maybe take some time out between postings, all of your poems seem a bit familiar. check out different poetry on the site. There are many more subjects to write on, nothing against your writing - but i think it would help you become a better poet if there was more variety and reflection.
"What we observe is not nature itself, but nature exposed to our method of questioning" - Werner Karl Heisenber