The Age of Gods
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The rhymes feel forced. But at the same time, I can hear it being read in a voice-over narrative style, like a sudden and brief summary. So it almost has a dry, humorous tinge. If you look at it that way.

That doesn't mean you wrote it that way.


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The Age of Gods - by Hidrolic - 01-28-2013, 11:44 PM
RE: The Age of Gods - by rowens - 01-29-2013, 12:04 AM
RE: The Age of Gods - by Yelleryella123 - 01-29-2013, 03:14 AM
RE: The Age of Gods - by Hidrolic - 01-29-2013, 03:19 AM
RE: The Age of Gods - by Yelleryella123 - 01-29-2013, 03:33 AM
RE: The Age of Gods - by Hidrolic - 01-29-2013, 04:25 AM
RE: The Age of Gods - by Todd - 01-29-2013, 06:16 AM
RE: The Age of Gods - by tectak - 01-29-2013, 07:27 PM
RE: The Age of Gods - by Todd - 01-29-2013, 08:52 PM
RE: The Age of Gods - by tectak - 01-30-2013, 07:29 PM
RE: The Age of Gods - by Hidrolic - 01-29-2013, 10:09 AM
RE: The Age of Gods - by heslopian - 01-29-2013, 03:03 PM
RE: The Age of Gods - by tectak - 01-29-2013, 06:02 PM
RE: The Age of Gods - by Mr. Shankly - 01-29-2013, 06:05 PM
RE: The Age of Gods - by Hidrolic - 01-29-2013, 08:47 PM



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