My Wife

[Hidrolic]

This is gooooood. I like your style.
My favorite part :

I’m her man she’s my girl
She’s my life I’m her world
My everything
My past, my forever more
My Yoko Ono
My Lenore

Once you got to the last 2 lines my heart melted. You had me at Yoko Ono, My Lenore sealed the deal.

She’s my addiction
No cure for her love
There’s no prescription

Another line there would be awesome, I think. The first 2 stanzas got me really into it. The way you placed yours words, I feel like I got the flow right away while I was reading it the first time, really quick - I wanted to know the whole poem from the first stanza.
I'm a sucker for this poem. Great job

Thanks for reading and I'm happy you like it.

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Full of feeling and as a married man I like this poem.
A couple of niggles about the last stanza. I feel in L1 "part" should be "parted"
In the last line of the poem I feel "survive" should be "survives".

Thanks for reading and thanks for the suggestions, I will correct it.

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I think your style is different but poetic just the same.....Well penned my friend....Whisk

That means a lot, thanks for reading