01-27-2013, 02:40 PM
This poem has been moved from Serious to Mild Critique. Serious Critique posting rules state that you should not post in that forum unless "you have already posted at least one considered, suitably detailed comment on someone else's poem in this or another critique forum". This is a new requirement (only changed earlier today) but you should till get a decent critique here in Mild /admin
It could be worse