Observer
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Hello! This is my first post here. I had a bit of trouble making the last verse rhyme, but I chose to go with the profundity of the contradiction instead of the syntactical aesthetics of prosody.

With dread anticipation of sanity
among mad men I wait
for deities of right
of which I pontificate.

None such from the gilded world arrives
to reveal the quiet lie.
Grotesquery,
latent eruptions of pride.

That which is, exists solely through a veil,
shrouds of ambiguity.
Ubiquitous, our biased eyes,
that gift us these realities.

Lacking ability to perceive,
nothing can truly be,
and with our eyes we are bequeathed
a world devoid of objectivity.

Dismal, juxtaposed against darkness,
I, a tiny figure,
engrossed with significance,
darkly ruminate on that which is pure.
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Observer - by nhmarine - 01-27-2013, 02:05 PM
RE: Observer - by Leanne - 01-27-2013, 02:40 PM
RE: Observer - by rowens - 01-28-2013, 07:35 AM
RE: Observer - by brandontoh - 01-28-2013, 03:52 PM



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