The House
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I found a buried triolet!

I'm not sure how a house can look obtuse... houses generally aren't gifted with great powers of deduction, after all. Other than that one word and setting aside the little meter bumps, I think this little poem manages to say quite a lot about power imbalances behind closed doors. Nice one, Jack.
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The House - by heslopian - 07-19-2011, 07:55 AM
RE: The House - by Leanne - 01-27-2013, 06:46 AM
RE: The House - by shemthepenman - 01-27-2013, 06:51 AM
RE: The House - by heslopian - 01-28-2013, 02:10 AM



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