A failed attempt

[rowens]

Is this any specific practice?


Cheese!!!
Just another day where I keep faking my smile
Oh its freezingly cold outside

'it's'


Something I can t feel

'can't'


Did you burn your hand again?
A wound that will never heal
That seems about right, there should be life inside
But the decent attempt just failed
I wish it would be more than just a fairy tail

Do you really mean a fairy's tail?
Or is it a typo: 'fairy tale'?


I am so tired, my eyes just faint
Please I am begging you come back to me, take me in your hand


Overall, this poem seems to be very close to working. It's not bad; just a little more work.