A Hobby
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(01-26-2013, 05:13 PM)billy Wrote:  i was going to do one about cow shit in farm yards and call it Eau de toilette Sad

good catch on butterflies, i've fixed it. the two dashes aren't really needed, it's to denote where the cut is in the haiku. thanks for the feedback.
You can do one now. =P Oh I see~ Thanks for clarifying. =)
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A Hobby - by billy - 01-26-2013, 04:43 PM
RE: A Hobby - by brandontoh - 01-26-2013, 05:00 PM
RE: A Hobby - by billy - 01-26-2013, 05:13 PM
RE: A Hobby - by brandontoh - 01-26-2013, 05:14 PM



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