01-26-2013, 04:48 PM
hi sambricka
basically it needs a lot more depth. at present everything in the poem is too generic and mainly cliche.
i think you'd be better helped in the novice forum, but it's here so i've replied.
basically it needs a lot more depth. at present everything in the poem is too generic and mainly cliche.
i think you'd be better helped in the novice forum, but it's here so i've replied.